Who am I?
My name is Abraham, I'm 21 years old, I
study mechatronics engineering and I love this career. I consider myself a kind
and friendly person, I like sports and spending time with my friends and of
course my family, I like being responsible and punctual because I think these
two features tell a lot about a person. Some of my greatest tastes are reading,
swimming, football and music.
I consider myself a dreamer, I'm a person
who wants to leave a mark, I have many goals I want to achieve long and short
term one is to open my own restaurant and continue the development of my
company, as this is one of my larger goals and is a big challenge for me but I
hope to accomplish this year.
A few months ago I used to work in Oaxaca,
in this place I was learning about to construction business and I think to this
experiences can help to develops skills.
Abraham, It's nice to meet you. You're very ambitious, That's really good I hope you can achieve all your goals.
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my life is summarized into three main branches: my family, God and work. I believe these are the keys to do what I want because with these three element've shaped my life.
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